Mixed Bag Author’s Notes
I have these and I suppose I should use them…
About Mixed Bag, first of all. It’s being written as I post it, meaning the multi-chapter stories are being written simultaneously. That’s fun because I jump around and really have to scramble to keep up. I’m about five days ahead of myself, meaning I have five chapters queued as I write and I’d like to get that buffer up to seven. It’s hard though since I have other commitments. So be aware that some of these author’s notes are about stories unfinished and in progress. I’ll try not to spoil anything or paint myself in a corner.
Foreword by Matt the Big Ass Fucker Self-explanatory. I wanted to poke fun at porn and all the crappy porn stories out there, including some of mine. The name of the author just makes me giggle. I think it’s amazingly clever and it really needs no other story. “Matt the Big Ass Fucker. The end.” is the whole story basically and either you have a sense of humor that can appreciate the joke, or you don’t. Basically I put that story as the foreword to scare off the people I don’t want reading my stuff at all. You must have a sense of humor or 90% of my writing will make zero sense.
The Long Wait for Tomorrow by Rachael Ross is my homage to Kurt Vonnegut and one of my favorite all time stories “The Long walk to Forever” but Kurt didn’t put a big sex scene in it…What a tease! I’d started a continuation with this, where Trent has to duel the slighted husband-to-be, kills him and then has a lot of clever dialogue with Molly’s father and ends up with not only the girl, but her birthright, which turns out to be a fleet of heavily armed spaceships. That was all pretty fun, but I changed my mind and ended it with the surprise that I did. I hope it was a surprise anyway.
Snack by evil little sister is about a recurring character. There will be additional Snack stories, but I can’t say where and when. I just know that she’ll be around because I have plans for her. Adding the WS code throws off a lot of readers and that’s intentional because future stories will be on the extreme side so I didn’t want to play pattycake to grab readers and then turn them off later. I prefer to do it right from the start when I can.
Harry by Uziel is just a story I wrote when I thought of the word “ballsucker” and was looking for some context. It took a dozen minutes to write and I have no desire to continue it past the ending. I write a lot of those sorts of things, mostly to clear out a the silly thoughts before I start working on something serious. It’s a cute story, not laugh out loud funny really, but one to make us smile and shake our collective heads.
By Any Other Name by rache was old, almost a year old and it was sitting in a forum. I didn’t keep a copy of it as I wrote the story hastily while I was online one day and I was looking for something for Mixed Bag and I remembered this story so I went searching for it. Basically it’s a couple of my favorite characters, the ones I use often for my existential stories about a generation of women adrift without direction, just anger. Riva is straight from “Hit n Run” and the narrator would be right at home in “Tenderness Apart” just as examples, and I use those characters a lot.
The New Club by High School Sweetheart is more fooling around. This is my teen naïve Lolita character, who basically knows exactly what she’s doing and why, but lies to everyone (including the readers) about it. It’s just escapist fun and it ends where it ends. I call that sort of writing “Doodling” mostly.
Mr. Merlin by Lisa Oquias I only have two mind control stories, both of them written by Lisa Oquias and she’s an alter ego that I mostly use for bestiality stories on pay sites. She doesn’t get a lot of free press, but she’s prolific as hell and I just wanted to include her in this collection. The story itself is just poking fun at size issues and mind control stories and harem stories and all that. The things I usually avoid.
The Traveling Man by Rachael Ross This story I rescued from a hard drive and it’s old. I wrote most of it when I was fixated on death and bad thoughts and I used to write a lot of stories romanticizing death and this was one of them. It’s going to be my Christmas story come December on other sites and forums, unless I come up with a better one.
STS 101 by Rachael Ross Another story I wrote for a mini-contest in a forum, Jack’s Erotic Pen (insert phallic imagery here) forum and I had to go dig it out, like I did with Any Other Name. I didn’t have my own copy and it existed only in that one lonely, forgotten corner of the net so I wanted to spread it around. It’s just a joke, an amusing kill ten minutes story.
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2008-09-16
The Door in the Closet by rache Okay now we’re getting into the serious stuff and this story is a little more serious than it appears at first glance. This develops slowly because there’s a lot of information and exposition that has to come out to explain the differences between the two universes. That can be really boring and I do struggle with it because I’m more character oriented, so any information has to be expressed in a way that informs the characters as much as the plot. My plots usually take a backseat to character development and I trust my instincts to lead me through the darkness that results.
This story is about a lot of things. The biggest element is a social and moral philosophy in this alternative universe where balance and harmony and equilibrium are paramount. I try to reference those ideas as much as I can and reinforce and demonstrate them and my eventual idea, the one in the back of my head is that there’s this almost perfect world that exists because of this philosophy, but to achieve it requires some serious sacrifices. Personal sacrifices that might be too much for most of us observing from this universe. That’s my basic premise and I’m only on chapter 6 at the moment, and they’re short chapters, so I have a lot of work to do and I have to be smarter than I’ve been so far with it. I’m not entirely happy with what I have.
Karen by Kylie X. is Kylie doing her Kylie thing. She’s a black girl forced into a relationship with a black man that her parents approve of, but in her heart of hearts, Kylie loves white men. That’s the basic premise behind all of her stories. She’s fixated on the interracial/taboo theme. The wrinkle in this story is adding a lesbian element and so it’s fun and I’m enjoying it. I’m very, very comfortable writing lesbian stories and so this is like a little vacation for me because I can just relax and let my fingers do the walking. In writing this story it’s important to emphasize that Kylie’s motives are reasonable and honorable. She doesn’t want to hurt Rodney unnecessarily, she wants to save him from embarrassment and anger if she can. Same with Karen. Kylie is trying very hard to understand and maintain her friendship with a woman who loves her. It’s a love she can’t reciprocate and so Karen and Rodney are basically a single character (thus I only have to show Karen and reference Rodney) in this story. Hopefully my point is that the emotions involved aren’t dependent on race or gender, it’s a human issue. Who are we attracted to and how do we deal with those feelings? That’s what Kylie attempts to resolve.
Making Chrissie by T.S.Severe This was a story I thought about continuing, but it’s probably unnecessary. When I wrote it my real concern was making sure I went overboard with Chris’ infatuation with Jocelyn. He’d walk on burning glass for her and that’s the real point. She’s pure evil, of course, having absolute power over Chrissie is bound to corrupt her and basically she’s a dark goddess of lust walking the earth. Not much else to say about this one I just wanted to do a Femdom story with forced m/m in it. Everyone else and their mother has one of those, so why not me?
Tina Vasquez – Texas Ranger by rache is one of my rare third person stories because it requires some jumping around from scene to scene and character to character. I rather dislike using multiple narrators and so I avoid it when I can. This story is actually the third part of a trilogy that I never finished called “Good Sports” written in 2002? Maybe. And posted at Necrobabes. Part 1 was a rape/snuff story. Part 2 was a suicide/necrophilia story. Part 3 was never written beyond the bonfire scene with the football players talking. So I decided to pick it up and I can grab scenes from the first two stories and integrate them as flashbacks basically and I think it’ll work well. I’m a better writer than I used to be and this story is NOT snuff and NOT necro, it’s mostly a romance with some murder mystery thrown in for good measure. Flashbacks come in two flavors. Good ones that work and really crappy ones that don’t. Nine times out of ten what we see in amateur porn are of the really crappy variety. I don’t think I’ve ever used flashbacks before, so this will be new for me and a bit of a test to see how well I can manage it. In 25 Pairs I was able to play with foreshadowing and that worked pretty good, I was happy with it. So I’m hoping I can pull off some flashbacks too. Wish me luck.
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2008-09-16
Devil Inside by evil little sister Here we have ELS playing a black Lolita who has some really strange ideas about love and marriage and white women in particular. Basically I just asked myself “What if Kylie and evil little sister had a baby?” and then went to town with it. There may be a part two, but I’m not exactly sure about how much the idea of humiliating Henry’s bitch of a wife appeals to me and that’s what it would be for the most part.
Natalie's World: After School Special by Madly Natalie is basically taking an idea voiced by Stacy in “Devil Inside” and writing a short scene based on it. It’s set in an alternative universe where black girls are playthings for white boys and their daddies. Good clean fun for the whole family, right? Not really a story, but a decent stroke scene for those of us who are into it.
RBVS 2 Teaser: Dog Bones (Lazarus) by rache I have a ton of Lazarus material. Too much of it basically and so any excuse I have to use some of it is always good. This was also an easy way to let anyone who saw it and cares know that yes, RBVS II is in progress and I’m working on it and all that good stuff. I really can’t comment on this too much. Lazarus is the same one from the bible and she’s basically the wild card trying to bring about Armageddon before a bunch of crazed Jesuit fanatics succeed in killing her and, oddly enough, bringing about Armageddon…Maybe. It’s complicated. Anyway, the deal with the thing she gets at the end of the story is that it was with Sixth Army at Stalingrad because the Germans thought it would make them undefeatable, like the Ark of the Covenant thing in RLA. When it became obvious that von Paulus was going to surrender, a few trusty Germans (SS guys probably) snuck out of the city and into the hills and buried it so the Russians wouldn’t get it. Sixty years later, Lazarus digs it up…She knew the Nazis had it because she gave it to them in the first place, which is another story altogether. How did she get it? She took it from a young Jesuit named Beschi who was a parish priest in Alsace-Lorraine and of course he was very unhappy about that, but quite startled at the discovery of Lazarus’ true nature. He was already delving into the mysteries of alchemy by then and soon had some small taste of immortality himself…But that’s another story altogether.
See a pattern here? Lazarus…What a beautiful nightmare to write her.
The Best Man by T.S.Severe is another transsexual story, of course and I went back to a favorite theme of mine, Femdom, but the Fem in this story has an eight inch cock. That’s always pretty fun. I like the idea of a bride getting fucked just before her wedding. I don’t really know why. Cheating stories in general don’t appeal to me personally. They’re kind of neutral for me, but that one idea of a bride cheating and standing at the altar with her unsuspecting husband, taking their vows with another man’s sperm in her womb…It’s evil. It’s hot and really bad! It makes me giggle, actually. It’s that devil inside I got.
So I wanted to twist on that a little and play with it. I had the idea halfway through that Becky should have had her shemale bridesmaid at the wedding and hooked Mark with a prospective transgendered bride of his own. It was too late by then and I didn’t feel like rewriting a lot of words, so I stuck to my original idea. But it is tempting to continue this with the characters I created. It’s really just a stroke story for people into transgender and dominant shemales. I wish my husband was into it, but he doesn’t even like the submissive ones and I totally don’t get that, but I guess a lot of guys aren’t into it.
The Imaginary Man by rache originally called Slut Wife, but I figured I'd steal from Shaw since he's so cool. I'll have to add this later. No time today! Sorry and the story doesn't post for a week anyway.
Okay, that’s all I have to say for author’s notes for now.
Love, rache
